Poem from dudn

[dudn3000]

Well, I tried to be a little poetry, but to my mind, this is not very good. Well, I sat there a couple of time and so I post it anyway! Please tell me your opinion about it!

We met in this summer of 1963 on the Brokeback Mountain
We became friends, were glad about that
But suddenly, there was more:
In this special night, I took you in this tent
And from that time on, we knew exactly how to spend our time
Then there was farewell
The pain nearly killed me, I got crazy
Wanted to be with you every time I breath
Wanted to be with you all the time
After four long years, our meeting again
It was so great, special, full of passion
And full of hope that we could go on
We met sometime
But for me, this wasn't enough
I wanted near, I wanted love
I needed someone to love me
And you were so far apart
I just can pray that you'll forgive me

Now I'm with you, with you all the time
I am with you on your way every day
I promise that I'll never leave you alone
But also now I can't touch or kiss you
I can't put my arm around you, can't hug you, can't tell you how much I care
The only thing I can do is wait
Wait, until you came to me
And then, finally, we could be together
- forever

[umijannis89]

ToT It made me cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!! *Sniiiiiiiiiiiiiff!!* Such a cute poem!! I loved it... It's very sentimental and makes us think about what Jack felt all this time... And what he feels after his death... It is such a sad thing u_u

[dudn3000]

Oh thanx!!! That's very nice of you! Glad, you like it!! And I'm very happy, because finally some one wrote me back!

[Kelley]

(I know, my utmost apologies on that front- it has been so dead here lately ... we really must change this somehow!)

Dudn, I must agree! Poetry is one thing that comes very hard for me and your words just flow effortlessly. I don't think anyone is ever completely satisfied with their work- but yours is lovely ;D Thanks so much for sharing your talents and love for BBM

[dudn3000]

I wrote another one, hopefully you like this one too:

I miss ...

Friend, I miss the love
The love, which we gave to each other
The love which was so strong that it will never fade away
The love which we weren't able to live
The love, which we had to hide
This love, which was the love of my life

Friend, I miss the moments
The moments, in which we were together
The moments, in which we talked about everything
The moments, in which you smiled at me
The moments, in which we knew what the other one was thinking
This moments, which were perfect

Friend, I miss the tingle
The tingle, which I felt when I saw you the first time
The tingle, which I felt when we kissed
The tingle, which I felt this postcard from you
The tingle, which I felt before all our meetings
This tingle, which I feel everytime I think of you

Friend, I even miss all the pain
The pain, which I felt after all our seperations
The pain, which I felt between our meetings
The pain, which grew in every moment you weren't with me
The pain, which nearly drove me crazy
This pain, which made my heart crack when I heard that you'll never be with me again

Friend, I miss you
Because you were the love of my life
Because you were the one which knew me best of all
Because you loved me as I am
Because you were the one for me

Jack Twist, I miss you!